I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
The present day I did wake up at 7:30 am. Then I hadst a showeth'r. At 8:00 am I hadst breakfast. At 9:00 me, mum and father wenteth to countdown. Then we did drop father to his cousin's house. At lunch, we hadst spaghetti and meatballs
My name's Natasha and I'm going to be keeping tabs on your Summer Learning Journey blog posts over the holidays. Hopefully I can give you a bit of feedback to improve your posts along the way!
You've really captured the essence of the Shakespearean language in this post, great work! It isn't an easy thing to do, quite an odd language. Do you think you could speak like that all the time? I don't think I could.
Adding a bit more information about the activity would hugely help your readers to get a better understanding and more enjoyment out of your post - a brief explanation would be enough. Also, if you wanted to make your posts more eye catching, you could think about including an image? For instance, in this case you could add a photograph of William Shakespeare!
Overall, this is a spectacular post, Ashaswi. Well done! I look forward to seeing more great work from you very soon!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Ashaswi!
ReplyDeleteMy name's Natasha and I'm going to be keeping tabs on your Summer Learning Journey blog posts over the holidays. Hopefully I can give you a bit of feedback to improve your posts along the way!
You've really captured the essence of the Shakespearean language in this post, great work! It isn't an easy thing to do, quite an odd language. Do you think you could speak like that all the time? I don't think I could.
Adding a bit more information about the activity would hugely help your readers to get a better understanding and more enjoyment out of your post - a brief explanation would be enough. Also, if you wanted to make your posts more eye catching, you could think about including an image? For instance, in this case you could add a photograph of William Shakespeare!
Overall, this is a spectacular post, Ashaswi. Well done! I look forward to seeing more great work from you very soon!