The dance crew did well.
I didn't like costumes color, dark blue and white weren't that good looking. I think that Black and white would be better. I didn't like the beat of the music. Somewhere it was like burping sound!!
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Hi Ashaswi!
ReplyDeleteIt's me again. I hope your holidays are going well, great work on another fantastic post!
This a wonderfully descriptive analysis. I assume this was written about a dance video? I like that you've been very specific with times, what you enjoyed and why and also what you didn't like throughout the dance.
Perhaps next time you could explain what the activity is a little bit more? Maybe you could include the video which you were critiquing/evaluating. This would help you viewers tremendously when reading your post!
Do you like dancing? If so, what is your favourite kind of music to dance to?
Excellent work Ashaswi, I enjoy reading your phenomenal posts and I look forward to seeing more from you in the near future :)