I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I think that 27 names should change their name into "Fashion 27". This will address their sentiment for 27 people who helped to support their business when they started it and this new name also sounds more trendy.
Well done on completing yet another activity! I like how you've used a different colour font for this one - it looks good! :)
Fashion 27 is quite a cool alternative. I like how you've come up with something new but maintained the importance of '27'. Did you have a look at the Twenty-Seven Names website? What are your thoughts on their clothing designs?
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Kia ora Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing yet another activity! I like how you've used a different colour font for this one - it looks good! :)
Fashion 27 is quite a cool alternative. I like how you've come up with something new but maintained the importance of '27'. Did you have a look at the Twenty-Seven Names website? What are your thoughts on their clothing designs?
Have a wonderful day! :0
Blog ya later,
Mikey