I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What a fantastic comic! It’s very funny! Hopefully the man doesn’t smell so bad that he scares all the fishes away! You’ve done a fantastic job matching your captions to the facial expressions of the men!
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
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Kia Ora Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteI’m super excited to see your blog post but unfortunately the link isn’t working! Could you please upload it directly to your blog instead?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hi Shannon,
DeleteI sorry but I can't upload it directly somehow, but I updated the settings for the link so probably it will work now.
Ttyl
Ashaswi
Kia ora Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteThat works! Thank you!
What a fantastic comic! It’s very funny! Hopefully the man doesn’t smell so bad that he scares all the fishes away! You’ve done a fantastic job matching your captions to the facial expressions of the men!
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hello again Shannon,
DeleteI think the man is gonna have bad luck with the fish!
I feel like the man sprayed some laughing gas on him XD!!
Okie, I'll write another comic I'll make it about mathletics multiverse since that's related to space adventures and rocket ships!
Byl
Ashaswi