I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
You’ve produced an impressive diagram Ashaswi! You should be proud of your work.
I love how you have included some relevant technical terms and planned for the usefulness of the dam. That is by having the agricultural farms, which the dam will be used for irrigating. The dam is an ingenious piece of technology that dates back to the ancient Egyptians. And now you’re learning about it thousands of years later, amazing!
Keep up the great work and Merry Christmas, Benjamin Martelli
Bonjour Ben, Thank you for the merveilleuse comment. Ok.. WHAT!!! I did not know that' the dam is an ingenious piece of technology that dates back to the ancient Egyptians' and that now I'm using it thousands of years later!!
My dad is a water engineer so he taught me this stuff.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ashaswi
ReplyDeleteBen here from the SLJ commenting team.
You’ve produced an impressive diagram Ashaswi! You should be proud of your work.
I love how you have included some relevant technical terms and planned for the usefulness of the dam. That is by having the agricultural farms, which the dam will be used for irrigating. The dam is an ingenious piece of technology that dates back to the ancient Egyptians. And now you’re learning about it thousands of years later, amazing!
Keep up the great work and Merry Christmas,
Benjamin Martelli
Bonjour Ben,
DeleteThank you for the merveilleuse comment.
Ok.. WHAT!!! I did not know that' the dam is an ingenious piece of technology that dates back to the ancient Egyptians' and that now I'm using it thousands of years later!!
My dad is a water engineer so he taught me this stuff.
Adios
Ashaswi