I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done a phenomenal job on your post! I’m super impressed by your positive, thoughtful, helpful post! I particularly like how you related to Lydia by mentioning you had chosen the same painting for your blog post! I also like how you asked questions to start a conversation.
What drew you to Lydia’s post?
Have you considered attaching the original post’s URL so your readers can see what you commented on?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done a phenomenal job on your post! I’m super impressed by your positive, thoughtful, helpful post! I particularly like how you related to Lydia by mentioning you had chosen the same painting for your blog post! I also like how you asked questions to start a conversation.
What drew you to Lydia’s post?
Have you considered attaching the original post’s URL so your readers can see what you commented on?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)