I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this poetry activity as I love reading and writing poems and summer is my favourite season!
I think your poem is awesome, you stuck to the summer theme well and what you could hear, feel and see during a summer day. I think the image you included added to the poem well.
Great job completing the slides and highlighting all the correct sound words, do you think you could try and reupload the video of your own featuring your summer sounds as the link is not working.
Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this poetry activity as I love reading and writing poems and summer is my favourite season!
I think your poem is awesome, you stuck to the summer theme well and what you could hear, feel and see during a summer day. I think the image you included added to the poem well.
Great job completing the slides and highlighting all the correct sound words, do you think you could try and reupload the video of your own featuring your summer sounds as the link is not working.
Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates