I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ashaswi, You've found out some great information about Sir Edmund Hillary.... I wonder if yo can find out about the other 4 people on our New Zealand Bank notes?
Kia ora. I was looking forward to reading this post about New Zealanders on our money. You made a great start with Sir Edmund Hilary and then there was not much else. You would need to make sure your have completed work prior to sharing I think. Hopefully you get to finish it because what you have done so far is great.
Hi Ashaswi, a really great start on Hillary. It would of been awesome to see a picture of Kate Shepard and some of the other people.I look forward to seeing if you complete this to your usual high standard.Stay awesome.
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Hi Ashaswi, You've found out some great information about Sir Edmund Hillary.... I wonder if yo can find out about the other 4 people on our New Zealand Bank notes?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ms Raisin, I am going to try finishing this slide show today. Hopefully I finish doing (atleast)1 of them.
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ReplyDeleteI was looking forward to reading this post about New Zealanders on our money. You made a great start with Sir Edmund Hilary and then there was not much else. You would need to make sure your have completed work prior to sharing I think. Hopefully you get to finish it because what you have done so far is great.
Kia ora Miss Waho, I will try to complete as many slides today.Hopefully I finish (at least) 1 slide today.
DeleteHi Ashaswi, a really great start on Hillary. It would of been awesome to see a picture of Kate Shepard and some of the other people.I look forward to seeing if you complete this to your usual high standard.Stay awesome.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hamish,thank you very much for your lovely comment.I will try to complete it and post it today.
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