I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Congratulations on completing another great activity! I'm so pleased that you've been able to make the time to do so much of the Summer Learning Journey programme - well done! :)
Great letter, Ashaswi! I really like that you've followed a proper letter format. It really does make it so much easier to read. Well done for introducing yourself at the beginning as well. I think you're the first blogger I've come across who has done that - good thinking! I think that if she could, Jacinda Ardern would do her best to provide facilities like this for free. Do you have any ideas on how the swimming coaches might be paid and the pool cleaned and maintained if people don't pay for lessons? I'd love to hear your suggestions. :)
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Mōrena Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on completing another great activity! I'm so pleased that you've been able to make the time to do so much of the Summer Learning Journey programme - well done! :)
Great letter, Ashaswi! I really like that you've followed a proper letter format. It really does make it so much easier to read. Well done for introducing yourself at the beginning as well. I think you're the first blogger I've come across who has done that - good thinking! I think that if she could, Jacinda Ardern would do her best to provide facilities like this for free. Do you have any ideas on how the swimming coaches might be paid and the pool cleaned and maintained if people don't pay for lessons? I'd love to hear your suggestions. :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey