I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ashu! This is well done! Your post is so funny. You even drew it in ur book! Some of the things don't really make sense. Next time you could add more pictures! From your bestie Daisy!
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kia ora Ashaswi your post is so funny. You even draw it to your book. I think you need to make it bright so we could see it. bye
ReplyDeleteHi Ashu!
ReplyDeleteThis is well done! Your post is so funny. You even drew it in ur book!
Some of the things don't really make sense.
Next time you could add more pictures!
From your bestie Daisy!