I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ashaswi I'm Basty from Whakamanawa. I see you made cloud it's nice it must be soft as candy floss. The cloud inside the jar looks like foam soap. How did you make the cloud because I would love to make one. Maybe you could put more information on how you did it?
Kia ora Ashaswi I'm Olivia.m from Whakamanawa. I see you made cloud it's nice it must be soft as candy floss. The cloud inside the jar looks like foam soap. How did you make the cloud because I would love to make one. Maybe you could put more information on how you did it Good BYe thanks you
Kia ora Ashaswi, this is Raewyn from Whakamanawa. I love how you made a cloud jar it looks so cool I think this is a experiment. Next time you could tell us what is the cloud jar like it does something cool or you just use it for decoration for your room. What are the things you use to make the cloud jar? Blog you later bye!
Hi Ashaswi It's Brodie. from whakamana I like how you post on your blog how did you make it it looks soft. next time you cloud tell us more information.
Kia Ora Ashaswi, it´s Phoebe from Whakamanawa. Your cloud looks great but I think it looks like bubbles. I don know what you use to make the cloud. Maybe you should tell us what you use to make it or how to do it.
kia Ora Ashaswi, its Jason from whakamanawa your cloud look good but the tiny bubbles give it away that it is soap.next time you could also tell us how to make it.
next time Hi ashaswi its Benaiah from whakamanawa. i liked you how put the cloud in the jar. next time you could put some more words about what you have done. maybe next time you could tell us how you did it. see you soon
HI Ashaswi I´m olivia H from whakanawa. I like your work that you did it is cool. next time you should put some words down the bottom of the page so we know what it is and how you made it. how did you make it.
I like your bottle with clouds! Maybe you should put a list of ingredients on how to make the clouds in the jar so me can also make one ourselves! BUt other then thats its good!
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Kia ora Ashaswi its Nikau.This looks fun and cool.Could you put how to make this because I really want to try this.How did you make this?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ashaswi I'm Basty from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI see you made cloud it's nice it must be soft as candy floss. The cloud inside the jar looks like foam soap. How did you make the cloud because I would love to make one. Maybe you could put more information on how you did it?
Kia ora Ashaswi I'm Olivia.m from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI see you made cloud it's nice it must be soft as candy floss. The cloud inside the jar looks like foam soap. How did you make the cloud because I would love to make one. Maybe you could put more information on how you did it Good BYe thanks you
Kia ora Ashaswi, this is Raewyn from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI love how you made a cloud jar it looks so cool I think this is a experiment.
Next time you could tell us what is the cloud jar like it does something cool or you just use it for decoration for your room.
What are the things you use to make the cloud jar?
Blog you later bye!
Hi Ashaswi It's Brodie. from whakamana
ReplyDeleteI like how you post on your blog
how did you make it it looks soft.
next time you cloud tell us more information.
Kia Ora Ashaswi, it´s Phoebe from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteYour cloud looks great but I think it looks like bubbles. I don know what you use to make the cloud. Maybe you should tell us what you use to make it or how to do it.
kia Ora Ashaswi, its Jason from whakamanawa
ReplyDeleteyour cloud look good but the tiny bubbles give it away that it is soap.next time you could also tell us how to make it.
HI Ashaswi I´m robert from whakanawa I like to comment with stuff because it beautiful and nice. nice jop Ashaswi. bye
ReplyDeletenext time Hi ashaswi its Benaiah from whakamanawa.
ReplyDeletei liked you how put the cloud in the jar.
next time you could put some more words about what you have done.
maybe next time you could tell us how you did it.
see you soon
HI Ashaswi I´m olivia H from whakanawa.
ReplyDeleteI like your work that you did it is cool.
next time you should put some words down the bottom of the page so we know what it is and how you made it.
how did you make it.
Hola Ashawswi! Christina from Whakamana Here
ReplyDeleteI like your bottle with clouds!
Maybe you should put a list of ingredients on how to make the clouds in
the jar
so me can also make one ourselves!
BUt other then thats its good!
Ingredients:
DeleteWhat you need:
1 x glass jar with lid
50ml boiled water from the kettle
aerosol can (eg. hairspray)
ice
I think I put a bit more water though and a bit less ice and hair spray.