I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I’m sorry the boat didn’t work out for you but I’m super proud you gave it a try! It looks like you followed the instructions well but it just didn’t pan out. Sometimes that happens but the fact that you tried is everything!
Do you have any ideas on how to make a better boat? A different design perhaps, maybe better materials? What would you do differently?
Kia ora Ashaswi I'm Kylah from Saint Marys school in Gisborne That boat is very cool looking! It's a shame it didn't work! If you could make this boat again, what would you do different on it so that it did float? mā te wā Kylah
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ashaswi,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
I’m sorry the boat didn’t work out for you but I’m super proud you gave it a try! It looks like you followed the instructions well but it just didn’t pan out. Sometimes that happens but the fact that you tried is everything!
Do you have any ideas on how to make a better boat? A different design perhaps, maybe better materials? What would you do differently?
Don’t forget to name your boat!
Happy blogging!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Kia ora Ashaswi
ReplyDeleteI'm Kylah from Saint Marys school in Gisborne
That boat is very cool looking! It's a shame it didn't work! If you could make this boat again, what would you do different on it so that it did float?
mā te wā
Kylah